Usuario discusión:BeskarKomrk/Southern Peoples of Scadrial/

Thanks for doing this here. I have a few suggestions as this was an article I originally wrote and obviously needs updating for Bands. First, we should change the name of the article to "Southern Scadrians", as this current title is bad. (This is my fault.) Secondly, it may be hard but we should try and avoid referencing the name of the books themselves in in-universe descriptions. I think the broadsheets give years. Use those.

This is generally a challenging article to write as it doesn't fit any of the subheading templates. Maybe the prior known facts should go away, I don't know. Difficult to say. But that would be my input on a cursory examination. Thanks again for working on this, seriously. -- Chaos2651 (talk) 23:27, 16 December 2016 (MST)

I definitely agree with the name change and removing the meta information from the main body of the article. I was thinking of moving it to a "Trivia" section, because it is sort of interesting how we found out about the Southern Scadrians. It doesn't quite fit any of the subheadings, it's sort of halfway between a Nation and an Ethnicity and a Culture. My current thinking was to model it after the skaa and noble articles and give a description of the various tribes that we know of. When The Lost Metal comes out, I'm sure we'll find out more about the organization of the states and the government and we can break it out into other articles. But I'll try to update this so you have an idea of what I'm thinking. --BeskarKomrk (talk) 08:15, 17 December 2016 (MST)