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==== A Change of Heart ====
The Kholin Army's next plateau assault was run jointly with Sadeas. Dalinar went ahead and was nearly overwhelmed as he tried to save Sadeas from overwhelming numbers, but Adolin and the rest of the army arrived just in time to save them. Adolin told Dalinar that he had given him quite a fright as he had had to punch through the entire Parshendi army to get to them. Dalinar explained to Adolin that he made the decision knowing that if anything had happened to him his son could handle the army.{{book ref|sa1|56}}
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|Maybe the Codes weren't just about protecting against the Parshendi. Maybe they were about something more—about giving the men commanders they could respect and rely on. About treating war with the gravity it deserved. Maybe it was about not turning a war zone into a festival. The common men had to remain on watch, vigilant. Therefore, Adolin and Dalinar did the same.
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A week after the plateau assault, Adolin went to a wineshop in the [[Outer Market]] with Danlan, [[Jakamav]], [[Inkima]], [[Toral]] and [[Eshava]]. Adolin complained about how he hated being proven wrong and wondered why Sadeas, who was in a position of strength, never used it to take out House Kholin. The group discussed Sadeas's motives, and the Kholin reputation, which made Adolin uncomfortable. After Danlan suggested it, Adolin told them he had tried and failed to get his father to relax the restrictions on the camp from the Codes on the camp. He then excused himself as he had a duel to prepare for against Resi, who had been vocally insulting his father, to prepare for .{{book ref|sa1|58}}
 
As he moved through the Outer Market to the dueling grounds, he noticed the differences between the Kholin officers and those of other highprinces. Adolin found himself annoyed with the others, and was asking internally if they knew there was a war going on. He then had a revelation.{{clarify}}
 
After his victory in the duel with Resi,{{book ref|sa1|58}}, Adolin went to his father and told him that he now understood why they followed the Codes now and that he absolutely must not abdicate. Dalinar, amused, told Adolin that he hashad convinced him. This shocked Adolin, who rarely winswon arguments with his father. Dalinar continued that he would draft an order that gave Adolin the right to depose him if he growsgrew mentally unstable. Adolin said he iswas alright with this so long as they dodid not tell Sadeas. Dalinar asked Adolin to at least try to believe Sadeas cancould change, even if he doesndidn't trust him. Adolin still believed Sadeas was manipulating his father. Dalinar also asked Adolin to make sure that it iswas only King's Guard soldiers loyal to him that arewere guarding Elhokar's rooms, as he believed there was something fishy going on. They entered Dalinar's chambers for the highstorm, where Navani and Renarin arewere waiting. After the highstorm, Adolin and the rest of the Kholins discovered that Dalinar hashad been speaking the [[Dawnchant]] during his episodes, which meant the visions arewere absolutely not delusions.{{book ref|sa1|60}}
 
==== The Battle of the Tower ====
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