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== Culture ==
The city of Khlennium was regarded as one of “wonder”.{{epigraph ref|mb1|16}} It was a cultural hub, with people of many nations,{{epigraph ref|mb1|32}} including Terris Worldbringers (such as Kwaan).{{epigraph ref|mb1|19}}
 
It was a cultural hub, with many different people -- both(make this more inclusive) Khlenni and Terris,{{epigraph ref|mb1|32}} including Terris Worldbringers (such as Kwaan).{{epigraph ref|mb1|19}}
It had marvellousmarvelous architecture -- magnificent cathedrals, stained glass windows, broad halls. Their architectural and civil engineering prowess allowed them to build grand structures and cities.{{epigraph ref|mb3|28}} Among its monuments was the great Khlenni library.{{epigraph ref|mb1|19}} They also had technological innovations, such as pocket watches,{{epigraph ref|mb3|29}} as well as their own language -- their word for the Hero of Ages was Rabzeen. {{epigraph ref|mb2|12}}
Among its monuments was the great Khlenni library.{{epigraph ref|mb1|19}}
 
It had marvellous architecture -- magnificent cathedrals, stained glass windows, broad halls. Their architectural and civil engineering prowess allowed them to build grand structures and cities.{{epigraph ref|mb3|28}}
MenThe woreKhlenni tailoredwere gentlemen’sviewed suits;{{epigraphas ref|mb1|32}}oppressors ladiesby worethe gownsTerris.{{epigraph ref|mb3mb2|2653}}. ManyHowever, many young Terrismen adopted Khlenni fashion, rather than their furs, while in the cities.{{epigraph ref|mb1|32}} Men wore tailored gentlemen’s suits;{{epigraph ref|mb1|32}} ladies wore gowns.{{epigraph ref|mb3|26}}.
They also had other technologies, such as pocket watches.{{epigraph ref|mb3|29}}
 
The Khlenni had their own language -- their word for the Hero of Ages was Rabzeen. {{epigraph ref|mb2|12}}
Men wore tailored gentlemen’s suits;{{epigraph ref|mb1|32}} ladies wore gowns.{{epigraph ref|mb3|26}}. Many young Terrismen adopted Khlenni fashion, rather than their furs, while in the cities.{{epigraph ref|mb1|32}}
The Terris viewed the Khlenni as their oppressors.{{epigraph ref|mb2|53}} (useful?)
The Khlenni government included a council, of which [[Helenntion]] was one of its last survivors.{{book ref|mb2|45}}
 
// Can this go in History?
 
After ostensibly defeating the Deepness, the Lord Ruler -- Rashek, masquerading as Alendi -- took the throne of Khlennium and claimed to have made his trusted friends into noblemen, the descendants of whom were the nobility of the Final Empire.{{book ref|mb3|62}} This was not actually the case -- (return to this)
 
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