Contribuciones del usuario
11 jul 2021
Encendedora
Appearance and Personality: Grammar fix. whoops.
m-6
Encendedora
Appearance and Personality: Updated a word, since the disgust might also be in jest, "clear disgust" might be too definite and give readers the wrong impression
m+4
Encendedora
Appearance and Personality: Updated to include a reference to Blushweavers extreme vanity.
+254
Esperanzador
Appearance and Personality: Updated to note that Hopefinder's body is the youngest, even if his status in the court is 5th oldest.
+68
13 jun 2021
Vasher
Swordsmanship: Added Denth's insistence that Vasher is not a skilled duelist
+221
Idris
Geography and Ecology: Added Siri's description of Idris
+361
Idris
Politics: Adding that Idris has allies to the north that would side with them in a war
+250
Austrismo
Curses: Formatting
m+4
Austrismo
Moving details about Austre himself to its own section, so people wishing to know more about Austrians view their god can find it quickly. Also added curses in case people want to be accurate with Idrian exclamations.
+1768
Austrismo
Teachings: Added Siri's description of Austre in chapter 29 to the Teachings section
+245
12 jun 2021
Vivenna
Relationships: Clarified that Vivenna loves Parlin like a brother, not a romantic partner
+149
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Vivenna
Relationships: Adding a reference to her like of Parlin, as shown by her Jealousy in chapter 28. Also, spacing out the relationships, as clumping them together made it difficult to find any specific one
+108
Parlin
History: Adding Vivenna's jealousy at Parlin's warming up to Jewels
+115
Parlin
Appearance and Personality: Adding an additional detail that Denth uses to describe Parlin
+69
Parlin
Appearance and Personality: Adding Denth's descriptions of Parlin
+135
Vivenna
Personality: The personality section, while very accurate and well written, is lacking in any kind of references to the book or annotations. I'm adding a reference to one major attitude change in Vivenna to slowly patch this up.
+298
Parlin
Attributes and Abilities: Added how he quickly blends into T'Telir
+148
Vivenna
Relationships
+92
Idris
Adding Economics section with mention of trade routes, farmlands, the lack of commerce at the time of the Phan Kal rebellion, and disaster relief funds
+1723
Hallandren
Economics: Added that Truthcall can vote on Hallandren's trade policies.
+211
Hallandren
Economics: Added a paragraph to note that priests control much of the trade in Hallandren, mentioned in chapter 19
+219
Hallandren
Added Economics section with a mention of their first economic boom caused by the Tears of Edgli, the importance of the Northern Trade Passes, and the importance of the Bright Sea. Needs to be expanded an needs a reference for the Hanald part, but I can't find it at the moment.
+902
Mar Brillante
Adding facts about the Bright Sea that Vivenna brings up in chapter 9.
+554
8 jun 2021
Usuario:Naka
sin resumen de edición
m-4
Usuario:Naka
Adding my own user page. Thanks for the edit rights! :D
6 jun 2021
Sondeluz
History: Added Lightsong's Post-returned but Pre-rebellion history
+759
Sisirinah
Appearance and Personality: Added another reference to Siri being distracted by Hallandren more than disgusted by it.
+245
Sisirinah
Relationships: Added relationships for Returned and Priests which can be expanded upon later.
+589
Disentería
Adding link to a Susebron the Fourth article that I'm creating.
+26
Retornado
Breath: It wasn't 100% clear that giving away a Returned's divine breath lead to death, as self-sacrifice doesn't necessarily mean death. Added a reference to how the returned die when giving away their divine breath to clarify.
+91
Retornado
Idris: Fixed a typo
m+6
Sondeluz
Appearance and Personality: Additional reference to Lightsong's colors
+18
31 may 2021
30 may 2021
Hallandren
Culture: Added duels for sport as something that happens in Hallandren. Seemed interesting to me that Vivenna knew of this pastime and its popularity.
+192
Lágrimas de Edgli
Adding Economics section, as the tears are the primary reason for Hallandren's prosperity.
+311
T'Telir
Wealthier Districts: Fixing a spelling mistake.
T'Telir
Wealthier Districts: Including the Tears of Edlgi in the plants that are found in Wealthy districts. this is important because the tears themselves are a symbol of the Kingdom's wealth and prosperity dating back to ancient times.
m+59
T'Telir
Slums: Added D’Denir adjective to the statues in T'Telir
m+10
Joyas
Cultural Views: Removed brackets I forgot to remove
m-5
Joyas
History: Adjusting some wording to prevent a run-on sentence.
m+11
Joyas
Changed "Appearance" to "Appearance and Personality" added a couple quotes from the book, and updated the history to include more detail about her life as a child.
+1849
Sinvida
Changing (preferably human) to (typically human) as preference is subjective.
m-1
Sinvida
Including Appearance and Cultrual Views on Lifeless from Idrians and Hallandren
+1356
28 may 2021
Tonk Fah
Fixed link again. Didn't know it was case sensitive
mTonk Fah
Fixed link from Denth's Team to Denth's Crew
mTonk Fah
History
m-8
Tonk Fah
Added that Tonk Fah is killing Idrian solders sent to fetch Vivenna behind the scenes.
+357
Arsteel
History: Removing section of history that is more applicable to Jewels than Arsteel. This additional detail can be found in the new "Relationship" section
-70
Arsteel
Relationships: Updated to reflect the better wording and references on the "Jewels" page
+28