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This is really great work Talanet! There were a few sentences that were a bit too speculative without further information - I've changed and/or removed them but please feel free to keep playing around with wording if you think there's a better way to phrase things.
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→History: Spelling; missing }
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tenses typos and quote sizing
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Removed update tag
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Marked page as "complete"
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Added quotes to the history section
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fixed link
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linkified
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fixed verb tenses
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Added history for Brade, just wanted to get it down, going to fix verb tense and add some quotes
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Added relationship info for Vapor.
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Added a quote to the relationships section
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27 feb 2020
Added a section about Brade's general relationship with Flight Fifteen, as well as her relationship with Morriumur. Will finish relationship w/ Vapor and the kitsen when I return home. Might add a quote for her relationship with the Flight, prob the one where she tells Spensa the flight is making progress(I think ch 16?)
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added a link to "tizmar"
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Added relationships for winzik and spensa, as well as a quote
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I'll second that; this is coming together nicely, Talenel. Just tweaking a few formatting things.
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great work Talenel. I think this can be upgraded to partial, it's hardly a stub anymore
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Added a subsection about Brade's cytonics, still searching for a quote for this section
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Added flying subsection to attributes and abilities
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26 feb 2020
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Undo revision 116749 by King of Herdaz (talk) looking at the page as a whole i made it worse
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→Appearance and Personality: making the quote look nicer
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Added image of Brade
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25 feb 2020
sp
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Fixed sidequote
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tried to split up the middle paragraph a bit
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Added some info on Brade's personality as well as a sidequote about her competitiveness, the quotation marks came out a bit odd
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removed link from quote
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Tweak refs
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fixed wikitionary links
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sort of fixed external links
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