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(Created page with "Hey hey, @User:Xnkvbo, I wanted to suggest moving some of the paragraphs you put under 'Appearance and Personality' - they don't quite fit under that heading I don't think...") |
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[[User:LadyLameness|LadyLameness]] ([[User talk:LadyLameness|talk]]) 05:28, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
: Thanks for checking in! Hmm, so what I was trying to do was use those things as background evidence for describing his personality, but maybe it ended up being too much just saying what happened and not enough actually summarizing his personality itself. I think really what I want to get at in the personality section is how he obviously behaves like a super-pampered monarch most of the time, because he's used to it, ''but'' he also seems to be a wise leader who wants what's best for his people and it does look like he is, at least in some ways, trying to put aside his kingliness. (The thing with Spensa is a pretty big part of that, showing that he actually does listen to his people now when they have ideas, though it would also certainly be relevant in a Relationships section.) The other sections could definitely use more content; if you want to move stuff around to get started on them, as long as there's something left on personality and some kind of support for it (maybe with less detail than there is now), that's fine by me! --- [[User:Xnkvbo|Xnkvbo]] ([[User talk:Xnkvbo|talk]]) 18:31, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
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